I went round my class at college and showed 5 people my trailer and asked them to give me some feedback on how I could improve it. These are some of the comments they gave me:
Sian:
" Its looking really good! I have seen you guys editing it and at first I wasn't sure what was going on but now I understand it fully! when's the film coming out? (laughs)"
Jack:
"Very good trailer but one thing I don't like is that you can hardly hear what the actors are saying most of the time so you might need to change that. Apart from that it is really well edited and I like the soundtrack you have put to it."
Ben:
"It's good how you get to know this guy so quickly and feel a bit worried for him when the bad guy comes in to ask about his idea! I think the lighting could be improved a bit though if I'm being honest"
Amy:
"This trailer is so well planned out! All the clips are the right length, you have good camera angles and the perfect amount of dialogue to keep the audience watching and keep them interested. Well done"
Todd:
" I like the story line behind this trailer it is very creative and gripping but the music is to loud in my opinion that you cant hear the actors very well and it is sort of hard to follow if you cant hear what they are saying"
Positives
- Good story line
- Good amount of dialogue
- Good camera angles
- Well edited
Negatives
- Music to loud when actors are talking
- Bad lighting in some scenes
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